
May I speak with you?
Do you remember those gentle words
That marked our journey of togetherness
Where flowers bloomed in colours of joy
In the eternal garden of love
Do you remember those gentle gestures
That spun our moments of expressions
Where birds cried in echoes of wonder
Sitting in the wish fulfilling trees of passions
Do you remember those gentle glances
That tied our hearts of oneness
Where songs were sung by angels of pure
Standing in the peripherals of light
Do you also remember your parting words
That shattered my world of innocence
Which made me wander without you
With a broken heart that could never be fixed
You may not remember this rain of course
That connected me once when I cried
Where my soul felt stillness in my coffin
What with my life laid to rest already
You may not remember me though
I wait for a moment of your glimpse
To say a word of my love of eternity
May I speak with you, my darling?
This is my contribution for Poetry Contest Week 14 conducted by Dr. Madhvi & Saranya Patel
http://madhvi-k.sulekha.com/blog/post/2008/02/express-yourself-contest-14-pick-up-your-pens.htm
Padmaja Balaji
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Thanks, Rahul. When the time comes, publishing will also happen.
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this is mindblowing.. just great.. i think you should publish ur poem..
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You are generously complimenting, Gita. Thanks a lot.
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Once again, a heady mix of emotions, a clever play of words.
You sure write well
Gita
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Hi Sampath,

I am very happy to see you here. Your kind words have cheered me up.
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very
vivd
and lucid
imagination
liked the aproach to the theme....
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It is real fun to write for pictures. Also to read others as well. I too am amazed at the quality and the varieties as you said. Thanks a lot, Sue. Your dancing pose is very sweet and nice.
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Ehsaas,
Thanks a lot dear.
You make me fly.
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Hi Padmaja,
This poem is so beautiful!
I am amazed at the quality and variety of poems based on this picture. It has been a real treat!
Sue
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wow Padmaja u have excelled urself here...
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